Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Beginning a Manuscript

It's that time of the year when most of us are busy with organising for holidays, easing up on writing, and hoping 2014 will bring good news.

As we ease into the holiday period, take a moment to reflect back on what you have achieved through out the year. It doesn't have to be a biggie, but something where your writing took a step forward. Congratulations. It's a great achievement to move forward in one's writing career. J
For me it was self-publishing two novels and they have been selling well. One of my novels Heat in the Outback has been selling extremely well since 2010. It's available in print and digital format.

What goes through your mind when you begin to craft a manuscript?
Firstly I have to say that reading is a valuable tool in the craft of writing. You have to read the genre you're targeting. Familiarise yourself with what is selling in that particular genre.

So as we plan our next novel slow down and think for a few weeks about the plot, and the characters. Plot, Characters, and writers voice is what sells a novel. 

Fill in character sheets and make sure you answer every question. We have to know our characters inside and out. In this way, they become real people on the page and real to our readers.

At the beginning of a manuscript the last thing on the heroes and heroine’s mind is a romantic relationship. The events of the story throw both characters into contact with each other. Then there has to be a tug of attraction between these characters causing an escalation in the conflict.
Also there should be a developing trust between both characters. Usually one or both characters admitting something to the other character show this. This is something they wouldn’t usually share with anyone else. This is the development of the characters attitude.

Declaring their love for each other When this happens too early in a manuscript, the manuscript loses sexual tension and the pace slows. To up this you need an event, which can make them step back a little. At some stage in the story there also has to be an acceptance of the other characters better qualities.

Internal conflict is where the heroine and hero's personal goals clash - Conflict must be believable and strong- Believable as relating to real life. Ask yourself would this happen in real life?

Each scene should have a major crisis. This crisis should be related to the characters struggle within that scene. When you choose an internal conflict, make the character really care about this conflict, by doing so your reader will also be concerned and won’t want to put the book down.  It will draw them in and take them on the emotional journey they are seeking.


External conflict is visible It is an influence from the outside, which threatens the characters situation or life. Conflict can be created by placing an obstacle before the hero and heroine. Find something to up the stakes. Ask yourself the question: What if?  Repeat this question a number of times and you will almost find that obstacle you have been looking for. Usually this takes up until ten goes, and wella, you have your answer.

Remember, whatever the external conflict, the characters can only solve it by working together. Once the internal conflict is established, put out all the stop signs and throw something else in that will pull them back making the conflict much higher.

If you don't have character interview sheets, or character biography sheets, I can email them to you.  I prefer to use the Character Biography, but it's personal preference. My contact details are on my webpage.

Hopefully once a month I will bring to you something to help you with your journey. I'm still travelling my road and would love for you to join me on our journey. :)

Saturday, December 7, 2013

Christmas Reading

Besides reading Cold Fear and Outback Fear, :) I thought you'd be interested in a novella I have recently read. The Kissing Season by Rachael Johns.

The Kissing Season is a sweet rural romance, and worthy of the read if you love a simple tale that will leave you feeling good.

I loved the buying of the bed scene in the beginning of the book. It made me laugh, and I was hooked. This was instant love for the hero, Matt. Talk about cheeky. I loved how she portrayed his character. lol. Matt and Hannah, they were meant to be together. It was a great read. Check out the cover below.

Rachael also is running a contest on her WEB PAGE that ends on the 21st of December. So get in now while you still have time. Here's the blurb, and mention of Rachael's other books. I could say Mandrought has been my favourite, but I have enjoyed all of her novels.


From the author of Man Drought and Jilted comes a funny and romantic Christmas story set in rural Australia.
Every family has a black sheep…and Hannah Elliot is it.
It’s no surprise to anyone when Hannah Elliot makes the spontaneous decision to marry a stranger in Las Vegas. But when she finds herself pregnant and her new husband files for an annulment, she dreads having to tell her family.
Returning to her Australian hometown of Wildwood Point, Hannah is determined to become a devoted mum and put her baby’s needs ahead of her own. She’s also set to prove to her family she can actually be responsible. This means putting her wild past behind her and accepting a job back in the family business…while keeping her pregnancy a secret!
Except, when gorgeous Italian Matteo Della-Bosca walks through the shop door, Hannah finds her resolve slipping fast…

You can read chapter one here: CHAPTER ONE

You can find it here on AMAZON;

The tree is finally up.

Well the tree is finally up. So what else have I been doing. Changing blog and website appearance, reading, and selling house, buying land, and oh okay, reading over my last wip. :) I can't say I'm having a break from writing as I think all authors have something writing related going on in their life. It's hard not to.

I'm pretty satisfied with what I have written, meaning my last two romantic suspense novels. Oh, and yes, naturally they are set in remote areas, meaning the Outback. I call them Rural Romantic Suspense. I'm hoping for these ones to find a publisher. In the meantime I'll be plotting the next one, and giving time to prepare character sheets etc. It's an exciting time, to start another wip.
I'll leave you with this. The tree. I love Christmas. I know I've said it before. lol... Merry Christmas :)



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